Six Sentence Sunday – East Willow
Hi everyone,
I’m back in the swing of things after going to RT and having an absolute blast.
For my first SSS in a while, here’s a little bit of my YA East Willow. If you’ve been reading along with it, you’ll find it a little heartbreaking. Liana has just found out she’s not human; instead she’s a freakish hybrid wolf witch. And she’s less than happy.
“Why couldn’t you have left me at home? I’d still be happy and wouldn’t have to deal with any of this shit!”
As I yelled in his face I noticed his eyes change, glowing fiercely before he yelled back at me.
“If could have, I would! I didn’t want you to come here!”
Recoiling from him as though he’d hit me, I leant against the doorframe, wanting so badly to meld into it and disappear.
Happy Sunday!
Liia x
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about 1 year ago
A very emotionally charged scene. Love it!
about 1 year ago
Great 6. Definitely want to know what happens next!
about 1 year ago
Sounds like an interesting story! Good choice on the six.
about 1 year ago
Heavy with emotion indeed! Great six.
about 1 year ago
Excellent dialogue exchange. When his eyes “glow fiercely” it’s a great accent to the scene. Neat six!
about 1 year ago
Man I don’t even know what’s going on and it’s sad. Great job!
about 1 year ago
Oh… the desire to disappear… such a universal feeling. Such emotion in her inner dialogue. Great six!
Amy Durham
about 1 year ago
Love that last sentence…very emotional six
about 1 year ago
So sad and beautifully expressed.
about 1 year ago
Ohh the intensity. Love it! Keep ‘em snippets coming.
about 1 year ago
Aww, I feel her anguish.
about 1 year ago
Very emotional…great six!
about 1 year ago
Ouch. Sucked me right in with the emotional intensity.
about 1 year ago
My heart feels all knocked around, well done. So glad you are back!!
about 1 year ago
Looking forward to reading how she comes to terms with the truth of who she is.
about 1 year ago
Oh, the poor girl! Love his ‘glow fiercely’ eyes though
about 1 year ago
Well-written. You can feel her misery!
about 1 year ago
Great six! Very emotional. I can’t wait to read what happens next.
about 1 year ago
Wow! What an emotional wallop. Def want to know what happens next!
Great six
about 1 year ago
Great conflict!
about 1 year ago
Great conflict and character interactions in this snippet! I felt her emotions loud and clear. Kudos!